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30.09.2008, 18:11 quote

s6boystu
s6boystu Joined: 06 Mar 2008 Posts: 3122 Location: United Kingdom, England, Essex
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another random one that just kinda flowed onto a piece of paper..

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There's a look in your eyes,
when you look at me
not a sparkle - more like fire
more like hatred than desire,
I don't know what i've done
most likely never will
I've thought about it long and hard,
ran scenario's through my head
stayed up late just thinking
what i could do to make things change
but change is not that easy
i'm bound to make mistakes
after all, i'm just a man..
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If there really is to be a soul mate out there, I think your soul mates are those people who make you feel at home, wherever you are. That hearing their voices and knowing they're close to you (even if in thought) makes you feel at ease.

 

30.09.2008, 19:14 quote

rocketgirl

Ya know, in my head that ended quite naturally thus:

...I am after all, just a man......
With more important things to waste my time thinking about!

I loved the poem, t'is strange though how my sarcastic mind just continued beyond the end....

 

30.09.2008, 19:50 quote

s6boystu
s6boystu Joined: 06 Mar 2008 Posts: 3122 Location: United Kingdom, England, Essex
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Thanks.. i think Laughing

i could have actually added about another 3 or 4 lines to it, but didn't want people thinking... oh god stu's on one again.. Laughing
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If there really is to be a soul mate out there, I think your soul mates are those people who make you feel at home, wherever you are. That hearing their voices and knowing they're close to you (even if in thought) makes you feel at ease.

 

30.09.2008, 19:57 quote

rocketgirl

It *is* a beautiful poem.
I'm just in one of those Unsentimental moods tonight....give it a few days and I will be re-reading it with tears in my eyes. Embarassed

 

01.10.2008, 05:52 quote

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Stu thats lovely, but you know me i'm a soppy one Crying or Very sad

 
 
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