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01.07.2008, 13:53 quote

klee1986xxxx

As some of you already know - pregnancy didnt go well , so written a little thoughtful poem , i know not brilliant but

Taken to the angels, before i got to see your face ,
Thinking of what could be , my heart began to race,
It came as a shock , to hear the bad news ,
It felt like my heart had been on a cruise ,
That day was hell , it couldnt get much worse ,
At the time i thought it was one big curse ,
Lifes full of good, bad and great things ,
Also of those awful sins ,
people dont die , they wait with the angels ,
one day i will see u with them angels,
lifes too short , got to keep living and have fun ,
got to turn that dark cloud into a sun ,
we gotta make the most of the life and laughter ,
just think lifes one big BAFTA

Kayleigh

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01.07.2008, 14:08 quote

cheekykev
cheekykev Joined: 11 Apr 2008 Posts: 1398 Location: United Kingdom, Scotland, Glasgow
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Klee i didnt know - I'm so sorry to hear this

xx

 

01.07.2008, 17:33 quote

rocketgirl
rocketgirl Joined: 17 Jun 2008 Posts: 1241 Location: United Kingdom, England, Hampshire
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Kayleigh i didnt know either, thats a lovely poem, keep it and remember it. I lost two girls years ago, the heartache doesnt go, but you get used to it and it becomes less intense with time, in my own experiences. I am so sorry, big hugs. xxx

 

02.07.2008, 17:41 quote

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Sorry to hear that, Klee, you know where I am if you need to talk x
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xx

Confidence - Wear it like make up.

 

02.07.2008, 18:55 quote

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Aww that's such a lovely poem, and so special, what great courage you have to be sharing it with us.

Many blessing s to you
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