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05.05.2008, 15:21 |
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lilacrose

Joined: 15 Mar 2008 Posts: 749 Location: United Kingdom, England, Hampshire
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There was an old mansion
an old dark mansion
There was a murder
A brutal murder
At the mansion there was a door
a creeking door.
Inside was a hall
A cobwebbed hall.
At the end was a flight of stairs
A flight of broken and battered stairs.
And at the top was a room
within nothing at all apart from the old
dried blood that had dripped
Down onto the cold damp wall. |
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05.05.2008, 15:49 |
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wolfwoman

Joined: 29 Apr 2008 Posts: 186 Location: United Kingdom, England, Sussex
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| ooooh eerie, I love it! |
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05.05.2008, 16:13 |
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lilacrose

Joined: 15 Mar 2008 Posts: 749 Location: United Kingdom, England, Hampshire
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I have a confession to make - my son wrote it when he was 6 years old at school, instead of doing some maths, and the school called in the psychiatrist - there was hell up, and we didnt even have telly so they couldnt blame video nasties hahaha.....he wrote it around the 10th anniversary of his great-aunt's grisly murder, though he knew nowt about it, he was and still is, a very 'perceptive' child, shall we say!
Glad you like it. I do too, and have it framed by my bed.  |
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05.05.2008, 19:07 |
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wolfwoman

Joined: 29 Apr 2008 Posts: 186 Location: United Kingdom, England, Sussex
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| lilacrose wrote: | I have a confession to make - my son wrote it when he was 6 years old at school, instead of doing some maths, and the school called in the psychiatrist - there was hell up, and we didnt even have telly so they couldnt blame video nasties hahaha.....he wrote it around the 10th anniversary of his great-aunt's grisly murder, though he knew nowt about it, he was and still is, a very 'perceptive' child, shall we say!
Glad you like it. I do too, and have it framed by my bed.  |
mhmm that makes the poem even better, knowing the context in which it was written! brilliant...of course not about the murder though sorry to hear that! |
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