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05.05.2008, 15:21
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lilacrose

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There was an old mansion
an old dark mansion
There was a murder
A brutal murder
At the mansion there was a door
a creeking door.
Inside was a hall
A cobwebbed hall.
At the end was a flight of stairs
A flight of broken and battered stairs.
And at the top was a room
within nothing at all apart from the old
dried blood that had dripped
Down onto the cold damp wall.
 
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05.05.2008, 15:49
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wolfwoman

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ooooh eerie, I love it!
 
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05.05.2008, 16:13
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lilacrose

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I have a confession to make - my son wrote it when he was 6 years old at school, instead of doing some maths, and the school called in the psychiatrist - there was hell up, and we didnt even have telly so they couldnt blame video nasties hahaha.....he wrote it around the 10th anniversary of his great-aunt's grisly murder, though he knew nowt about it, he was and still is, a very 'perceptive' child, shall we say!

Glad you like it. I do too, and have it framed by my bed.
 
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05.05.2008, 19:07
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wolfwoman

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lilacrose wrote:
I have a confession to make - my son wrote it when he was 6 years old at school, instead of doing some maths, and the school called in the psychiatrist - there was hell up, and we didnt even have telly so they couldnt blame video nasties hahaha.....he wrote it around the 10th anniversary of his great-aunt's grisly murder, though he knew nowt about it, he was and still is, a very 'perceptive' child, shall we say!

Glad you like it. I do too, and have it framed by my bed.


mhmm that makes the poem even better, knowing the context in which it was written! brilliant...of course not about the murder though Sad sorry to hear that!
 
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