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27.08.2006, 14:55 quote

TravellerRay
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Okay so how is the brain power out there? Can you come up with 2 lines to show your potential partner how poetic you are (or witty if you can be both)? And no cheating we know most of Shakespear. So sorry but no "Shall I compare thee to a summer's day"

Just found out myself how difficult this is. The wings song about silly love songs is playing very loudly in my head.

My poor offering

Together tonight, we dance through the dawn
Your beauty a challenge, a moth I am drawn


Look forward to your much superior efforts. Smile

Ray

 

27.08.2006, 15:00 quote

Anonymous

i'm just gonna move this to poetry and literature.

how's this?

together forever, eternally apart.
you offer me diamonds, when i want your heart.

 

27.08.2006, 15:18 quote

TravellerRay
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Ouch how shallow am I for not getting past the dating threads? Very good reply.

Ray

 

30.08.2006, 14:47 quote

scotincornwall

You want it all;

Perhaps it's too small?

Wink

 

30.08.2006, 15:52 quote

Anonymous

ScotInCornwall wrote:
You want it all;

Perhaps it's too small?

Wink


lol, love it

my heart i gave for you to take
and pierce it you did with a stake

 

30.08.2006, 15:58 quote

Anonymous

i am here
and he is there...love has flown, im so alone

 

30.08.2006, 19:31 quote

TravellerRay
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Oh Aluria that read so sadly

There you are alone amongst many
And then you look at the crowd around
A thousand souls each one an island
Yet every island has a beach

 

08.09.2006, 17:16 quote

Anonymous

We're in a bar, its packed to the door,
Some out on the pull, some looking for more.

I smile (with teeth)sort of giving you the eye,
you saunter over and give flirting a try.

To be frank you're rubbish, but I think its cute,
you've got something about you, we just might suit.

You smile (with teeth) you give me the eye,
I lean towards you, you give kissing a try.

To be frank you're good and you like it too,
the bar disappears, its just me & you.

Minutes turn to hours, hours turn to days,
can't get enough of each other, like a teenage craze.

Years later I tell you I wasn't flirting with you,
I was smiling at the loo roll stuck to your shoe!



(sorry its more than 2 lines, but I got carried away! LOL)

 

08.09.2006, 17:20 quote

Anonymous

That's excellent Spare Very Happy

 

08.09.2006, 17:21 quote

Anonymous

redoctober wrote:
That's excellent Spare Very Happy


thanks! Confused

 

08.09.2006, 17:24 quote

TravellerRay
TravellerRay Joined: 30 Jul 2006 Posts: 89 Location: United Kingdom, England, London
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Quote:
That's excellent Spare


I agree.

With these topics we are also adding a new dimension to a toothy smile. Those orthodontically challenged are either going to have an amazing nightlife or a lot of slaps. Cool

Ray

 

09.09.2006, 17:28 quote

Anonymous

TravellerRay wrote:
Quote:
That's excellent Spare


I agree.

With these topics we are also adding a new dimension to a toothy smile. Those orthodontically challenged are either going to have an amazing nightlife or a lot of slaps. Cool

Ray


ok - we'll settle for their best cheesey grin they have!
Its not all about teeth though.... a good smile lights the eyes! Laughing

 

09.09.2006, 17:34 quote

Anonymous

i hid for too long but you came and found me
an acorn of love shall soon be a tree

haha my muses just packed up and left Very Happy

 

09.09.2006, 21:45 quote

Anonymous

If you say yes to me, then i will run to you quickly
if you say no to me..then your too picky...



that would work wouldnt it?..lol

 

10.09.2006, 08:21 quote

Anonymous

53846 wrote:
If you say yes to me, then i will run to you quickly
if you say no to me..then your too picky...



that would work wouldnt it?..lol


LOL.... that works!!! Laughing

 
 
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