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27.08.2006, 15:00 quote

Anonymous

i'm just gonna move this to poetry and literature.

how's this?

together forever, eternally apart.
you offer me diamonds, when i want your heart.

 

30.08.2006, 15:52 quote

Anonymous

ScotInCornwall wrote:
You want it all;

Perhaps it's too small?

Wink


lol, love it

my heart i gave for you to take
and pierce it you did with a stake

 

30.08.2006, 15:58 quote

Anonymous

i am here
and he is there...love has flown, im so alone

 

08.09.2006, 17:16 quote

Anonymous

We're in a bar, its packed to the door,
Some out on the pull, some looking for more.

I smile (with teeth)sort of giving you the eye,
you saunter over and give flirting a try.

To be frank you're rubbish, but I think its cute,
you've got something about you, we just might suit.

You smile (with teeth) you give me the eye,
I lean towards you, you give kissing a try.

To be frank you're good and you like it too,
the bar disappears, its just me & you.

Minutes turn to hours, hours turn to days,
can't get enough of each other, like a teenage craze.

Years later I tell you I wasn't flirting with you,
I was smiling at the loo roll stuck to your shoe!



(sorry its more than 2 lines, but I got carried away! LOL)

 

08.09.2006, 17:20 quote

Anonymous

That's excellent Spare Very Happy

 

08.09.2006, 17:21 quote

Anonymous

redoctober wrote:
That's excellent Spare Very Happy


thanks! Confused

 

09.09.2006, 17:28 quote

Anonymous

TravellerRay wrote:
Quote:
That's excellent Spare


I agree.

With these topics we are also adding a new dimension to a toothy smile. Those orthodontically challenged are either going to have an amazing nightlife or a lot of slaps. Cool

Ray


ok - we'll settle for their best cheesey grin they have!
Its not all about teeth though.... a good smile lights the eyes! Laughing

 

09.09.2006, 17:34 quote

Anonymous

i hid for too long but you came and found me
an acorn of love shall soon be a tree

haha my muses just packed up and left Very Happy

 

09.09.2006, 21:45 quote

Anonymous

If you say yes to me, then i will run to you quickly
if you say no to me..then your too picky...



that would work wouldnt it?..lol

 

10.09.2006, 08:21 quote

Anonymous

53846 wrote:
If you say yes to me, then i will run to you quickly
if you say no to me..then your too picky...



that would work wouldnt it?..lol


LOL.... that works!!! Laughing

 

12.09.2006, 09:31 quote

Anonymous

I caught your gaze from across the bar
you standing there in your latex bra
I planned to make a move on you
On my way to the loo
So I staggered off in your direction
You saw me coming and checked your reflection
Looking back you smile at me
But its to late I need a wee
I barge pass you in desparate need
The warning sign I did not heed
'Mind your head' it did proclaim
'Ouch' to late, oh the pain
But as I lay on the floor
I look up and see a lot more
I notice that your naked down there
Not a pube in sight, completelty bare
So I gather myself and get straight up
And ask 'can I lick your shaven muff'
Next thing I know Im back on the floor
The bouncers dragging me towards the door
I didn't know you were the bar maid
No I doubt I'll ever get laid.

 

12.09.2006, 09:34 quote

Anonymous

morillo wrote:
I caught your gaze from across the bar
you standing there in your latex bra
I planned to make a move on you
On my way to the loo
So I staggered off in your direction
You saw me coming and checked your reflection
Looking back you smile at me
But its to late I need a wee
I barge pass you in desparate need
The warning sign I did not heed
'Mind your head' it did proclaim
'Ouch' to late, oh the pain
But as I lay on the floor
I look up and see a lot more
I notice that your naked down there
Not a pube in sight, completelty bare
So I gather myself and get straight up
And ask 'can I lick your shaven muff'
Next thing I know Im back on the floor
The bouncers dragging me towards the door
I didn't know you were the bar maid
No I doubt I'll ever get laid.


lmao,

 

12.09.2006, 10:57 quote

Anonymous

lMAO you romantic old fool you Laughing

 

13.09.2006, 11:11 quote

Anonymous

As I log in to this site today
I check my inbox with utter dismay
Empty again Im sad to say
What is it that makes it this way

Is it my pic, am I that bad
Or do I come over really sad
Plenty of views my profiles had
For just one message I'd be surely glad

Im in desperate need for a woman to touch
For Im wearing out poor Fiona's crotch
She wont last another poking
You may laugh but I aint joking

So alas it maybe time to leave
A sigh of relief I hear you heave
Alas not more stupid comments made
No wonder this poor bloke never gets laid.

 

13.09.2006, 11:29 quote

Anonymous

morillo wrote:
As I log in to this site today
I check my inbox with utter dismay
Empty again Im sad to say
What is it that makes it this way

Is it my pic, am I that bad
Or do I come over really sad
Plenty of views my profiles had
For just one message I'd be surely glad

Im in desperate need for a woman to touch
For Im wearing out poor Fiona's crotch
She wont last another poking
You may laugh but I aint joking

So alas it maybe time to leave
A sigh of relief I hear you heave
Alas not more stupid comments made
No wonder this poor bloke never gets laid.


awww that brought a tear to my eye, we dont want you to go, so im gonna message you complete random messages every day so when you log on you have a msg Smile

 
 
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