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27.08.2006, 15:00 quote
i'm just gonna move this to poetry and literature.
how's this?
together forever, eternally apart.
you offer me diamonds, when i want your heart.
30.08.2006, 15:52 quote
ScotInCornwall wrote: |
You want it all;
Perhaps it's too small? |
lol, love it
my heart i gave for you to take
and pierce it you did with a stake
08.09.2006, 17:16 quote
We're in a bar, its packed to the door,
Some out on the pull, some looking for more.
I smile (with teeth)sort of giving you the eye,
you saunter over and give flirting a try.
To be frank you're rubbish, but I think its cute,
you've got something about you, we just might suit.
You smile (with teeth) you give me the eye,
I lean towards you, you give kissing a try.
To be frank you're good and you like it too,
the bar disappears, its just me & you.
Minutes turn to hours, hours turn to days,
can't get enough of each other, like a teenage craze.
Years later I tell you I wasn't flirting with you,
I was smiling at the loo roll stuck to your shoe!
(sorry its more than 2 lines, but I got carried away! LOL)
09.09.2006, 17:28 quote
TravellerRay wrote: | ||
I agree. With these topics we are also adding a new dimension to a toothy smile. Those orthodontically challenged are either going to have an amazing nightlife or a lot of slaps. Ray |
ok - we'll settle for their best cheesey grin they have!
Its not all about teeth though.... a good smile lights the eyes!
09.09.2006, 17:34 quote
i hid for too long but you came and found me
an acorn of love shall soon be a tree
haha my muses just packed up and left
09.09.2006, 21:45 quote
If you say yes to me, then i will run to you quickly
if you say no to me..then your too picky...
that would work wouldnt it?..lol
10.09.2006, 08:21 quote
53846 wrote: |
If you say yes to me, then i will run to you quickly
if you say no to me..then your too picky... that would work wouldnt it?..lol |
LOL.... that works!!!
12.09.2006, 09:31 quote
I caught your gaze from across the bar
you standing there in your latex bra
I planned to make a move on you
On my way to the loo
So I staggered off in your direction
You saw me coming and checked your reflection
Looking back you smile at me
But its to late I need a wee
I barge pass you in desparate need
The warning sign I did not heed
'Mind your head' it did proclaim
'Ouch' to late, oh the pain
But as I lay on the floor
I look up and see a lot more
I notice that your naked down there
Not a pube in sight, completelty bare
So I gather myself and get straight up
And ask 'can I lick your shaven muff'
Next thing I know Im back on the floor
The bouncers dragging me towards the door
I didn't know you were the bar maid
No I doubt I'll ever get laid.
12.09.2006, 09:34 quote
morillo wrote: |
I caught your gaze from across the bar
you standing there in your latex bra I planned to make a move on you On my way to the loo So I staggered off in your direction You saw me coming and checked your reflection Looking back you smile at me But its to late I need a wee I barge pass you in desparate need The warning sign I did not heed 'Mind your head' it did proclaim 'Ouch' to late, oh the pain But as I lay on the floor I look up and see a lot more I notice that your naked down there Not a pube in sight, completelty bare So I gather myself and get straight up And ask 'can I lick your shaven muff' Next thing I know Im back on the floor The bouncers dragging me towards the door I didn't know you were the bar maid No I doubt I'll ever get laid. |
lmao,
13.09.2006, 11:11 quote
As I log in to this site today
I check my inbox with utter dismay
Empty again Im sad to say
What is it that makes it this way
Is it my pic, am I that bad
Or do I come over really sad
Plenty of views my profiles had
For just one message I'd be surely glad
Im in desperate need for a woman to touch
For Im wearing out poor Fiona's crotch
She wont last another poking
You may laugh but I aint joking
So alas it maybe time to leave
A sigh of relief I hear you heave
Alas not more stupid comments made
No wonder this poor bloke never gets laid.
13.09.2006, 11:29 quote
morillo wrote: |
As I log in to this site today
I check my inbox with utter dismay Empty again Im sad to say What is it that makes it this way Is it my pic, am I that bad Or do I come over really sad Plenty of views my profiles had For just one message I'd be surely glad Im in desperate need for a woman to touch For Im wearing out poor Fiona's crotch She wont last another poking You may laugh but I aint joking So alas it maybe time to leave A sigh of relief I hear you heave Alas not more stupid comments made No wonder this poor bloke never gets laid. |
awww that brought a tear to my eye, we dont want you to go, so im gonna message you complete random messages every day so when you log on you have a msg
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