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04.09.2008, 20:04 quote

moose666

Push my fingers past her ear, watch them disappear into her black hair. I wish the rest of me could go with them. Her bedroom is quiet but my heart screams;
a horrifying sound like a hundred crippled horses lying crumpled on the ground, begging for a rifle to come and put them down.

 

04.09.2008, 21:26 quote

choochi0
choochi0 Joined: 13 May 2008 Posts: 4702 Location: United Kingdom, England, Sussex
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That is beautiful.

 

05.09.2008, 22:48 quote

moose666

So is the one who it's about.

 

06.09.2008, 19:30 quote

Bliss23
Bliss23 Joined: 21 Mar 2007 Posts: 4329 Location: United Kingdom, Scotland, Edinburgh
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yes, lovely. Smile
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08.09.2008, 14:59 quote

deepthroath

moose666 wrote:
Push my fingers past her ear, watch them disappear into her black hair. I wish the rest of me could go with them. Her bedroom is quiet but my heart screams;
a horrifying sound like a hundred crippled horses lying crumpled on the ground, begging for a rifle to come and put them down.


For some unexplained reason, that made my pulse race.

 

08.09.2008, 16:32 quote

moose666

DeepthroatH wrote:


For some unexplained reason, that made my pulse race.


That's a result then. Wink

 

08.09.2008, 16:33 quote

rocketgirl
rocketgirl Joined: 17 Jun 2008 Posts: 1940 Location: United Kingdom, England, Hampshire
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I thought it was very melancholic.

 

08.09.2008, 16:36 quote

moose666

I suppose it is, in a way.

 

09.09.2008, 07:46 quote

deepthroath

moose666 wrote:
DeepthroatH wrote:


For some unexplained reason, that made my pulse race.


That's a result then. Wink


Crying or Very sad

Thank you.

 

09.09.2008, 17:09 quote

moose666

DeepthroatH wrote:
moose666 wrote:
DeepthroatH wrote:


For some unexplained reason, that made my pulse race.


That's a result then. Wink


Crying or Very sad

Thank you.





 

10.09.2008, 12:53 quote

deepthroath

Embarassed Wink

 
 
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