I am drunk

I feel like a Punk

How are you

Do you need a poo

The clocks go back

put on your mac

it might rain

Yeah right............... I'm a pain - hey first ever effort at doing a poem

Nice poem!!
That's not bad for a first attempt, mine was worse =P

thanks imperfect.....

simple
sweet
i like the reference to the mac - reminds me of penny lane

I think it wasnt that bad for a first try at poetry

Very emotive Claudia, well done

Thanks Scottie

i would say all my best stuff is written while at least tipsy,
and some of them i cant even remeber writting at all,
just waking up to find it in a wordpad document on the desktop, its either me being very drunkenly creative... or i got little pixis that live in my house that write stuff for me when im comatosed on the floor... hehe.

lmao, ...sounds like one of mine

Thats been on there for ages Jimbo, well seeing you dont go into the poetry thread often

i never go in here ! .....thought it was about time, ...and there is some exellent stuff in here too