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25.03.2008, 14:20 quote

klee1986

Righty am gonna attempt writing a short poem lmao bear with me Mad

 

25.03.2008, 14:26 quote

klee1986

So here i am on FB with no clue how to work it,
Im doing this poem and gonna look a right tit,
So far there are many fab people i have seen,
Some of who, i am very keen,
The games are cool with such endless fun,
Even tho i dont know how to work some,
Ive still got to meet the perfect funny guy,
I dont know where i go wrong, i often ask why ??,
Im gonna end the poem here before i make it worse,
Now u have gotta read it, u r under my curse,

LMAO Soweee a lil crap am still getting used to it Embarassed

 

25.03.2008, 17:39 quote

megalone

Does it help if I say I like it?

Probably not, but I did so there........

 

25.03.2008, 20:10 quote

klee1986

megalone wrote:
Does it help if I say I like it?

Probably not, but I did so there........

I think u should have a go Megz

 

25.03.2008, 22:00 quote

s6boystu
s6boystu Joined: 06 Mar 2008 Posts: 3122 Location: United Kingdom, England, Essex
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i like it too, nice and simple Cool
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25.03.2008, 23:05 quote

Anonymous

yeah it was good, ..shouldnt have mentioned a right tit though as now i want to see your left one

 

26.03.2008, 15:47 quote

romanogypsy32

Very Good

 

13.04.2008, 22:21 quote

klee1986

Sooo here is a poem i am writing requested by Mulder lol

Its called ........... Jackie Chan

He can do all the moves, and sure can bend in places,
If i ever saw him hes welcome to do up my laces,
He may be old, but had a body to die for,
If i had to kung fu him, id end up on the floor,
Hes old enough to be my grandad but blimey hes hot,
When he was my dads age he prob was a tot,
A celeb i admit i have liked for long years,
There u go, its out now my piers,

LMAO sowee al i could think of Mulder Embarassed crap i know

 

13.04.2008, 22:26 quote

mulder83

well done im still working on mine

 

13.04.2008, 22:27 quote

lilacrose

Jackie Chan is old? Bugger, what does that make me? Crying or Very sad

PS lurrrve ya poems!

 

13.04.2008, 22:30 quote

klee1986

lilacrose wrote:
Jackie Chan is old? Bugger, what does that make me? Crying or Very sad

PS lurrrve ya poems!
Nooooo i mean "older" than me Laughing

 

13.04.2008, 22:35 quote

lilacrose

That's ok, I just looked him up on wiki and i see his is actually 12 years older than me, so I'll let you off!!!

 

13.04.2008, 22:37 quote

klee1986

LOl Phew Surprised Hes actually older than he looks isnt he Surprised

 

13.04.2008, 22:41 quote

lilacrose

He's 54. I thought he was my age.....maybe its me that's old after all? Razz

 

13.04.2008, 22:45 quote

klee1986

LMAO Nooooo surely not ........... Now old did u say u were 21 ???? Laughing

 
 
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