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Home >> Poetry & Literature >> My First Go At A Poem .......... klee
25.03.2008, 14:26 quote
So here i am on FB with no clue how to work it,
Im doing this poem and gonna look a right tit,
So far there are many fab people i have seen,
Some of who, i am very keen,
The games are cool with such endless fun,
Even tho i dont know how to work some,
Ive still got to meet the perfect funny guy,
I dont know where i go wrong, i often ask why ??,
Im gonna end the poem here before i make it worse,
Now u have gotta read it, u r under my curse,
LMAO Soweee a lil crap am still getting used to it
25.03.2008, 20:10 quote
| megalone wrote: |
| Does it help if I say I like it?
Probably not, but I did so there........ ![]() |
25.03.2008, 23:05 quote
yeah it was good, ..shouldnt have mentioned a right tit though as now i want to see your left one
13.04.2008, 22:21 quote
Sooo here is a poem i am writing requested by Mulder lol
Its called ........... Jackie Chan
He can do all the moves, and sure can bend in places,
If i ever saw him hes welcome to do up my laces,
He may be old, but had a body to die for,
If i had to kung fu him, id end up on the floor,
Hes old enough to be my grandad but blimey hes hot,
When he was my dads age he prob was a tot,
A celeb i admit i have liked for long years,
There u go, its out now my piers,
LMAO sowee al i could think of Mulder
crap i know
13.04.2008, 22:30 quote
| lilacrose wrote: |
| Jackie Chan is old? Bugger, what does that make me? PS lurrrve ya poems! |
13.04.2008, 22:35 quote
That's ok, I just looked him up on wiki and i see his is actually 12 years older than me, so I'll let you off!!!
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