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10.08.2006, 08:31 quote

Anonymous

quick laura rewrite that line!! it doesn't do our manhating crusade much good now does it! bloody optimism. optimism shmoptimism!

 

14.08.2006, 21:00 quote

mcw82
mcw82 Joined: 17 Nov 2005 Posts: 194 Location: United Kingdom, England, Cumbria
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No keep it hon, i always see optimism in your poetry, another goodone laura even if its spawned from pain, onemorelevel gone, getting htere? Smile
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28.09.2006, 23:23 quote

tantric37
tantric37 Joined: 04 Sep 2004 Posts: 141 Location: United Kingdom, England, London
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here is one night love

A Night To Remember

Hesitation in my eyes,
Apprehension in yours,
Dilemma in my mind
Decision in yours


Your charisma
My charm
Passion unbridled,
Love unconditional


Rising desire
Beating hearts
Longing eyes
Melting emotions


Together as one being
Feeling of being whole
Two bodies once
Now one soul


Promises unsaid
Trust forever
Now as one
This love eternal

 

29.09.2006, 03:47 quote

Anonymous

tantric37 wrote:
here is one night love

A Night To Remember

Hesitation in my eyes,
Apprehension in yours,
Dilemma in my mind
Decision in yours


Your charisma
My charm
Passion unbridled,
Love unconditional


Rising desire
Beating hearts
Longing eyes
Melting emotions


Together as one being
Feeling of being whole
Two bodies once
Now one soul


Promises unsaid
Trust forever
Now as one
This love eternal


Such a simple poem Tantric, but beautiful in its simplicity Very Happy

 
 
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