quick laura rewrite that line!! it doesn't do our manhating crusade much good now does it! bloody optimism. optimism shmoptimism!

No keep it hon, i always see optimism in your poetry, another goodone laura even if its spawned from pain, onemorelevel gone, getting htere?
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Love you all
Matt xx

here is one night love

A Night To Remember

Hesitation in my eyes,
Apprehension in yours,
Dilemma in my mind
Decision in yours


Your charisma
My charm
Passion unbridled,
Love unconditional


Rising desire
Beating hearts
Longing eyes
Melting emotions


Together as one being
Feeling of being whole
Two bodies once
Now one soul


Promises unsaid
Trust forever
Now as one
This love eternal