that was very good and entertaining. i'm sure you'll have buckets of luck with your authoring career. i would upload some of my own work but it's far too long lol. 44700 words last count.

It didn't take much to work out the plot HO, but it had me gripped and was disappointed it ended so soon. I think it has the potential to make it into a much longer story with the doctor as the hero of the day. But please, no adding a love interest!!! lol

What are the titles of the ones you've had published? It would be interesting to look them up and have a read. Oh, and you're name would be useful too

i just thought i'd give you the first page of my own work in progress..... it's progressed quite nicely so far but it's still only the first draft....well here goes................................(by the way the 3/4 marks are supposed to be - marks but for some reason they dont show up here lol.)


Not many people truly believe in all the dark against the light out there. I know. I’ve seen it. It’s like a mist that shimmers around all things good. The more you notice it, the less you notice all the good it’s surrounding. Sometimes, I think it will grow so dense that it will choke the life out of us all. That’s where I come in.
My name is Maria Sanders. I’m a professional bounty hunter of both normal and paranormal criminals. I have a small office in a run down old building. Not swanky, you understand. We don’t want to advertise our presence. Anybody who needs to know about us will. My boss is Alec. He’s a real good guy. And my hero to boot.
He taught me everything I know ¾ but not everything he knows to hear him tell it. I met Alec when I was a fresh-faced, innocent seventeen year old. Well, as innocent as any seventeen year old can be. My parents had died the previous year in a traffic accident and I was working two jobs to keep myself alive ¾ it was a pretty weird meeting.
There I was, crouched in the corner of a filthy alleyway protecting the prone body of my best friend, Ciara. She had just been attacked by a ¾ wait for it ¾ vampire. I had never even contemplated their existence. Now I regularly haul their asses to jail ¾ since some swarthy politician thought it would benefit the human race to have them made legal citizens. Yeah, that worked out great!
All of a sudden, the three vampires were just so much dead meat on the gravel. My rescuer ¾ Alec ¾ took me back to his place to treat me for shock and I pestered him until he gave up and trained me. I’ve never looked back since ¾ it only scares me when I realise how quickly the monsters are gaining!
I often wonder if things would have worked out differently had Alec just told me to get lost.
Would I now still be a healthy-minded twenty two year old ¾ nearly — working two jobs to keep myself alive? Or would I be a bitter woman with tortuous nightmares of fanged attackers in a dirty alleyway, not able to hold down a job at all? Hmm, I wonder. Neither sounds half as exciting as my life now. But both are infinitely less dangerous.
Just two months ago I sustained a minor — according to whom? ¾ injury. I ended up with seventeen stitches in my forearm. That’ll look good on my wedding day. Hey, a girl can dream cant she?

thanks for the stories...decided to copy and paste so as to read later on..

hmmm so long as you don't steal it lmfao

the thing about authors is this... you don't have to copyright your work... it's already copyrighted from the second you start with once upon a time. lmao.

Have read both Mandy. WOW!!! Keep at it girl, you're fantastic. When the book gets published, i expect an autograph

IF i send it off and IF the person recommends it to an editor and IF it does get published....... of course you can have an autograph lol.

If i send it off and IF the person recommends it to an editor and IF it gets published...of course you can have an autograph!! lol



just let me know if you want a further installement...as i said i have 44700 words of it written..................