Poetry & Literature >> Worst poem ever

Bliss23

To a thought

You’ve troubled me, damn you,
With sweet words… Just like lemon juice.
With carved feelings
Thrown out of love.

You’re just human,
Human among humans.
What you say is wrong!
Shut up! Leave!

I will stand high and you’ll stand higher,
I will stand high and you’ll stand lower.
We’ll never be alike,
Stop troubling yourself.

I am ruby and you’re emerald,
Both lovely, yet so different.
Your thoughts are in vain,
That’s what we’ll always be.

Leave now, though it’s too late!
I’ll want you, love you, but you won’t be.
We won’t be.
Why would we, how could we be?

Cease now and let me live,
Follow my path…
To feel my love and happiness,
To laugh and cry without you.

Leave! You hear? You won't stay here.
Farewell, get off my mind.
You’ve been here far too long and I won’t listen anymore,
If you don’t go, I’ll vanish.

As of today I don’t exist for you,
From now you’re on your own.
You’ll never get a hold of me again,
Farewell! Step into the night.

(this has been translated from another language and it sounds much better in that language. Could it compete for the worst poem ever? What do y'all think?)
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thefreq

I think you might be onto something Bliss, if it was translated using the net or some kind of spangley software then it probably doesn't say what the original says but yep, definitely a terrible poem.. You will understand of course, I said all that without being the least bit educated about such things.

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