Favourites
Most popular topics | Poetry & Literatureopen/close
- What book are you reading... (181)
- Your favourite book... (73)
- Limericks cont........ (61)
- right proper" Liter... (38)
- Any writers on board ?... (35)
- A Poetic Challenge... (33)
- Can you solve the Darknig... (28)
- Hi I’m Gary and have just... (25)
- Dave.......... (24)
- Untitled... (23)
- My First Go At A Poem ...... (21)
- Go To Page 56... (21)
- Recommedations... (20)
- Life without love.... (18)
- Raymond E. Feist.... (18)
- Pain.... (14)
- ode to my kitty... (14)
- Alone... (12)
- what book are you reading... (12)
- my first (drunk ) poem... (12)
- a reason to write ?... (11)
- isnt it strange - i wrote... (11)
- Crippled horses... (10)
- Misery... (10)
- I Love You... (10)
Latest topics | Poetry & Literatureopen/close
- Go To Page 56...
- Lost Love!!!...
- 26/9/08...
- Downpour girl...
- chapter one.....
- untitled.....
- Song to the Siren...
- Banned....
- I have to have him....
- If i do?...
- Every night and day...
- Crippled horses...
- dogshit...
- I DON'T WANNA...
- piss...
- right proper" Liter...
- Recommedations...
- a small offering...
- Good pop culture/reality ...
- An oldie...untitled!...
- Limericks cont........
- The Castle on The Beach...
- The Page...
- The Forest...
- Limericks!...
Home >> Poetry & Literature >> The Field
02.07.2008, 16:01 quote
The Field
Unkept promises,
Flourish here.
(A field full of broken dreams)
A mournful moon watches,
Warily with a silent stare.
The wind whirls by,
with untold tales.
(The forgotten sound of late night screams)
A somber silhouette stalks the shadows
In the shade of the days gone by.
The keeper of The Box.
Welcome to the barren lands.
Where the sands of time dare not tread,
& The clouds are lined with lead.
Here the figure stands,
To the east.
At the epicentre,
of the wrought ravine.
Which used to run with rapid beauty,
Now ravished from the riles of precursory events.
That ripped through the veins of this once magnificent marvel.
The shape of a slouch of a woman,
skulks solemnly over secrets.
(The keeper of The Box)
She woefully weeps over what was
(What is held within)
She waits for the wonder to release,
wishful thoughts
weave in and out
wanderers circles
squirm subconsciously.
Tranquil,
she waits.
Languorously.
In the barren lands.
(The field of broken dreams)
The keeper keeps her promises.
(To the child that heard the screams)
Outside the safety of the sorrows.
(The layers of the box)
Is a safer place still.
(For the little child lost)
(She waits for him, to help him through the grim)
(He wants to leave, have closure)
Does the child have the will?
---
2nd in my Child In A Box Series. Image creator unknown. Some formatting has been lost, comments/criticism welcome.
06.07.2008, 14:33 quote
one word.. Awesome. I like your style alot ![]()
_________________
Myspace clicky
Facebook Clicky
06.07.2008, 15:52 quote
It' really great, blows me away.
I can't find my poem - or am I just stalling cos it would never stand up to that?
You cannot post new topics in this forum
You cannot reply to topics in this forum
You cannot edit your posts in this forum
You cannot delete your posts in this forum
You cannot vote in polls in this forum




