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03.06.2007, 22:11 quote

Anonymous

wrote this last week....

The memory blurs fast
Of the woman i loved, before the last
Though memories do often fade
They get stored, as soon as they are made
In a safer place, for when we leave this plane

Do we meet up with all our old loves
When we have taken our last breath?
Do we forget the fights
And love again after death?
Are our memories all thats left
Of a life of love thats been bereft?

I hope we do, because it would mean no more
The pain and loss in romantic war
The petty squabbles, the pointless fights
The times apart, the lonely nights
So if memmories are all we take
To the land after this when we never wake
I will still be loving you
i shall not forsake.

 

03.06.2007, 22:14 quote

Anonymous

Its great scottie, very relatable (sp)

 

03.06.2007, 22:16 quote

Anonymous

loving it - made me cry!

 

26.08.2007, 09:55 quote

Anonymous

The time between heartbeats

I wanted to go on a journey of some kind
So I went to the lost property office
Because I thought I’d lost my mind.

I asked if they had brains going spare
But they just shook their heads
And gave a vacant stare.

I asked about buying intelligence on the cheap
And they said try curry's
Where people are easily lead, like sheep.

So I get to currys, but they are out of stock
So I ask where I can get perception
They tell me of a café called the hard rock.

The hard rock café is 12000 miles away
If I walked on water
I could get there in 2 weeks and a day.

At the hard rock, people are paying for seats
Pretending to be fashionable
And living in the time between heartbeats.

 

20.01.2008, 17:47 quote

Anonymous

excellent

 
 
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