After being inspired by averagemale's poetry Ive decided to share a bit of mine with you all. This is one written a few years ago when i split up with my first love


I used to think that our love was so strong
Now I know that I was wrong
I cant eat, I cant sleep, it's all too hard
At least your mind can go when you are on guard

You've given me so many second chances
Even though Ive had other romances
You've been with me through thick and thin
I used to think of you as my next of kin

Can't you see that I love you
Can't you see that I care
We still have so many things yet to share
So many mistakes you've already forgiven
You were my only reason for living

Three years are so long, how can you throw it away
Why can't you be here, be here to stay
Life is a bitch, it deals so many blows
I can't help right now but feel so low

I've never felt like this before in my life
I feel my heart has been stabbed with a knife
So this is how it feels to be heartbroken
I want you back, can I give you a token
A token of love to show you how i care
Don't say no, it's not something I could bare

I know I should let you go, let you get on with your life
It's hard though wne my feelings of love are so rife
Please come back, someday, somewhere
You know I'll be waiting for you anywhere

now im jelus! ur so much better than me
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Its just that down and depressed feeling you get when you break up with someone...helps you right good poetry

And answer to your questions, yes it was a long time ago so im deffo over him

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Half past twelve

why u call me so early? its a half past twelve
I got to wake up in the morning and compose myself
put on my brave face put on my smile
dance for the wolves, you know they might eat me up
hunger wild divide my spoil
larger than rats and a little more serious
Their eyes burn with a thousand souls
hunt thee not me wolf i ask in despair
howl at the bloody moon
in just that moment you too hunger
as i know the lonely night
in just that moment i have become you
when the night eye is full and has seen through your guile
will you call me so early,dont call me so early,
i got to wake up in the morning and compose myself
i got to wake up in the morning and try to smile.


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