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07.04.2011, 19:46 quote

s6boystu
s6boystu Joined: 07 Mar 2008 Posts: 3089 Location: United Kingdom, England, Essex
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Staring in to space
tears forming in my eyes
i don't want you to go away
i don't want you to die

the thought of you not being here
Seeing your empty chair
It makes me feel sad and hollow
Call me selfish i don't care

I want to give you a hug
And say it'll be alright
Don't cross that bridge just yet
Don't go in to the light

I've tried my best to make you proud
And helped out where i could
you taught me things i'd need to know
If i could take your place i would

When your time arrives
And not before it's due
I'll be there to hold your hand
To tell you i love you.
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07.04.2011, 20:49 quote

handsel
handsel Joined: 18 Mar 2009 Posts: 2254 Location: United Kingdom, England, West Midlands
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Lovely, Stu.
Robert Frost said a poem begins with a lump in the throat.
The best ones leave you with one too!
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09.04.2011, 00:55 quote

gypsymoon
gypsymoon Joined: 17 Jan 2010 Posts: 2565 Location: United Kingdom, England, Norfolk
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That's a beautiful poem, thanks for sharing.
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10.04.2011, 09:45 quote

s6boystu
s6boystu Joined: 07 Mar 2008 Posts: 3089 Location: United Kingdom, England, Essex
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As you might have guessed, i had a bit of an emotional crisis the other night.. made the above in to this..

http://i50.photobucket.com/albums/f338/orionmad/lost.png

Gotta say, i feel a bit uneasy about it being in public due to how personal it is to me, but thanks for the comments.
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If there really is to be a soul mate out there, I think your soul mates are those people who make you feel at home, wherever you are. That hearing their voices and knowing they're close to you (even if in thought) makes you feel at ease.

 
 
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