Ok so i wrote this a couple of months ago. Ill explain it at the bottom. Dont know if its good or not but a few of my friends thought it was, the ones that read it.


What will be, will be, when will you come for me.

I open my eyes and look around,
No ones there, there is no sound.
I feel like crying but i have to be strong,
This will change, it wont be long.
To this life of lonliness i am not bound.

I work hard, try to be the best i can be,
For my friends, future love and family.
Its never been good enough though
No matter how great and far i grow.
Every morning, noon and night, its always just me.

Others tell me, how great i am and can be
They tell me, the others are the ones who are unlucky.
But i lie and i lie, all the while
I lie by keeping up my smile.
But im not really happy.

But i fight and i fight
I know its whats right.
I keep getting better and better doing all i can do
Trying to be all i can be, just for you.
Ill always try, from morning to night.

I finally meet you
So amazing and wonderfull, too good to be true.
We have a good time together
You promise youll stay forever
My smile, finally real, and i promise too.

I feel so loved, never been so happy.
You say you love me, the feelings are shared by me.
I hold you close in my arms, look at the sky
I couldnt feel sad, not even if id try
I close my eyes, and think of what will be.

I open my eyes and look around,
No ones there, there is no sound.
I feel like crying but i have to be strong,
This will change, it wont be long.
To this life of lonliness i am not bound.

End.

Basically ive been single most of my life. I had a gf for 1 year, it was long distance, we never got the chance to meet. She broke my heart and hurt me too much so i broke up with her. A few months later i started having a reaccurring dream where i always met this wonderfull woman and fell in love with her and was happy. Sometimes in the dream id realise it was a dream, id try to remember her name, through every possible method, but i never could. Havent had it in a while now lol. I made this poem about it.

Hope its good.

Wow, that was really moving!

I can relate to that.
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Thanks! i only recently writing again, well 1 or 2 lol. i have notes on fb, since your added you can check them out. theres one about me and my life so it should explain why i stopped writing in the 1st place.

lol not many posts for this : /

Beautiful poem Francis101..and be assured that your time will come one day..when you do meet that special person..even if it takes another 20 years..

Most people could relate to your poem, Francis101.
I hope you met that wonderful woman.
And, if you haven't, just believe she is out there - waiting to meet you.

Here's one of mine, written in response to a bitter poem by someone who had been put up for adoption as a baby. But she didn't know her mother, or the circumstances.

A Love I Made Earlier

I just can’t forget the day,
They took my baby away.
Thru all my tears, over the years,
Yeah! A silent river of grief.
An’ I wish…
Well, I wish I’d one chance to attest,
That I loved her. Yeah!
Loved her first and best.
She stole my heart. That little thief!
An’ I’d tell her,
‘What I did, God above,
Was only done outta love’,
So she’d have, see, a better life.
A better life than me. Yeah!
My God’s-honest belief.
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