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23.04.2008, 23:28 quote

mulder83

there is someone I know who the dark clouds follow
but they aint the type to drown themselves in self pity and sorrow
I would like to hug her and tell her its ok dont be blue
but i dont want her catching my awful man flu
so all i can do is wish her good night
and hope those dark clouds soon take flight

 

23.04.2008, 23:30 quote

klee1986

Thats a really good poem Scott

 

23.04.2008, 23:32 quote

mulder83

thank you

 

23.04.2008, 23:33 quote

s6boystu
s6boystu Joined: 06 Mar 2008 Posts: 1993 Location: United Kingdom, England, Essex
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that's a nice poem fella, with a friend like you, i can almost guarantee that she'll be alright
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23.04.2008, 23:36 quote

mulder83

s6boystu wrote:
that's a nice poem fella, with a friend like you, i can almost guarantee that she'll be alright



cheers mate.i know its not my vocation in life but ive been giving them a stab since coming on this site.

 

23.04.2008, 23:40 quote

s6boystu
s6boystu Joined: 06 Mar 2008 Posts: 1993 Location: United Kingdom, England, Essex
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most of the ones i write are purely done by what i'm feeling at the time, although on some occasions they just pop into my head.

If you don't think about them, sometimes they flow more freely Cool
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24.04.2008, 12:10 quote

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PasleptSiekare Joined: 21 Feb 2007 Posts: 3527 Location: United Kingdom, England, Nottinghamshire
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Very good, Scott
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