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21.10.2009, 11:47 quote

brigadoon63
brigadoon63 Joined: 19 Oct 2009 Posts: 6 Location: United Kingdom, Scotland, Glasgow
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When I saw you on my computer screen, my eyes lit up with joy,
As there staring back at me, was this gorgeous handsome boy.
You sent me a message on Flirtbox, and I added you as a friend.
I saved your picture in my files, and I sent you a message then.

You answered me almost instantly and nervous you made me feel,
I read your words and they made me smile, but my heart I knew you’d steel.
We text each other a thousand times and eventually we did speak.
Your voice so soft and gentle made my knees all soft and week.

I met you just Monday gone, nervous and scared was I
But I knew the instant I opened the door, I wouldn’t have to try.
You were standing there in front of me, looking handsome and extremely fine,
I opened the door and let you in and wanted you to be mine.

You looked directly into my eyes and told me they had a sparkle.
And continued throughout the night to make my eyes dazzle.
I melted inside my heart and did not know what to do,
I wanted to say back to you, “It’s because I am looking at you. “

The night now has come and gone, so quickly did it go,
Your thoughts for me now, I surely do know.
XXXX XXXX, I like you back, but I do not know what to do.
It has taken me all by surprise the thoughts I have of you

I will wait until you are ready, to date me now and then,
But if this is not what you want, please tell me when you ken.
If things go well between us, off Flirtbox I will surely come.
As I know the time I’ll spend with you, can only be described as fun.

 

21.10.2009, 14:36 quote

70

That's a lovely poem you've written above. I hope it works out for you.

 

21.10.2009, 18:59 quote

tryst46

Nice poem. I wish you good luck that it is the one.

Maybe like your namesake, you don't just vanish for another hundred years but come back for the one reason you can return; to tell us that you have indeed found love.

 

21.10.2009, 19:12 quote

handsel
handsel Joined: 18 Mar 2009 Posts: 2355 Location: United Kingdom, England, West Midlands
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Yep, I agree with mirrorpool and tryst46! Laughing
Good Luck with xxxx xxxx!
(You sure that's his real name? Razz )
_________________
Give me golf clubs, fresh air and a beautiful partner, and you can keep the clubs and the fresh air.
(Jack Benny)

 

21.10.2009, 19:29 quote

corazones2rotos

handsel wrote:
Yep, I agree with mirrorpool and tryst46! Laughing
Good Luck with xxxx xxxx!
(You sure that's his real name? Razz )


Love to read your post handsel. You make me laugh every time. Very Happy


Very nice poem. I do wish you a lot of luck and hope that they are "the one" and Wish you many years of happiness. Very Happy Should we all be so lucky!

 

22.10.2009, 09:17 quote

brigadoon63
brigadoon63 Joined: 19 Oct 2009 Posts: 6 Location: United Kingdom, Scotland, Glasgow
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Hi,

This is a poem that I wrote a long time ago for someone that I thought was the one. I think I have realised after 9 months that he isn;t. I didn't meet him here. I put it on just to let people see it can happen.

Cath x

 
 
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