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03.02.2010, 14:36 quote

klee1234

Being a mum it feels sooooo great,
With that saying i can`t debate,
It changes your life for the good,
The feelings in my heart, they want to flood,
When you hold your baby, for the first time,
You reassure them, and make them calm,
You have to grow up, it aint all bad,
He will grow up to be a great lad,
The love for them, it comes so fast,
That love will stay and forever last,
Their first smile, you burst with pride,
Youre their mum and by their side,
Their first word you jump with joy,
And you say "thats my baby boy"

i havent written t hem in a while so im a bit rusty with them lol

Klee x x

 

03.02.2010, 15:18 quote

gypsymoon
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Great start though... keep writing it's a lovely way to express yourself and really nice to look back on when you're older and got time to reflect back on life.
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04.02.2010, 14:33 quote

klee1234

gypsymoon wrote:
Great start though... keep writing it's a lovely way to express yourself and really nice to look back on when you're older and got time to reflect back on life.
Thanks

 
 
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