seem to get a few viewers but no replies, just wondered if something sticks out as wrong somehow ?

would appreciate other people giving me an honest answer please.

I had a quick look and there's nothing wrong.
But here's a few relevant topics.
http://www.flirtbox.net/dating/what-attracts-you-to-a-profile-.html#391899

http://www.flirtbox.net/advice/answering-profiles.html#392677

Also to improve your profile, read these topics:
DATING > What puts you off about a persons profile?
DATING > Better Success (Tips & Advice)
The latter is an excellent post.

Welcome and Good Luck!

(If you post to the forums on a regular basis, that will help. And - who knows - you might meet someone you like here! There's loads of different topics. If you can't find one you like - start your own! )
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